Here's another response to VisDare from Anonymous Legacy. It's a simple 85 words to make up for my recent overages.
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The last thing he remembered was his wife--upon noting his missing belt and smelling the gin and unfamiliar cologne emanating from his skin—rushing toward him roaring, “You will never be late again!”
The last thing he remembered was his wife--upon noting his missing belt and smelling the gin and unfamiliar cologne emanating from his skin—rushing toward him roaring, “You will never be late again!”
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Ouch! What a revenge meted out by his wife. And I like your flipping the time from his perspective.
ReplyDeleteI shall take great care from now on not to be late for anything my wife organises!
ReplyDeleteAn enjoyable tale.
I must make a note not to be late for anything my wife organises!
ReplyDeleteAn enjoyable, if not somewhat chilling, tale,
Thanks to you both for reading and commenting! I very much appreciate it.
ReplyDeleteSparsely and chillingly worded. And done in half the word count? Brilliant. I always look forward to your VisDares!
ReplyDeleteVery chilling indeed, a consequence to be remembered.
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