Wednesday, July 24, 2013

A Discussion on Bronze


The following was written for Anonymous Legacy's VisDare #30: Basking. It is 137 words, done very quickly (about 20 minutes) because I need to get to sleep. As always, please leave me comments. I enjoy reading them.



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A Discussion on Bronze

For decades, he dreamed of having a friend who would linger with him as others bustled by.  The constant stream of passersby made him feel both gawky and invisible. One day, a man walked near. The bronze lion, having poor peripheral vision, only caught a glimpse of the slightly hunched man before this stranger began to climb up his tail. Even though the lion was quite old, the pressure of footsteps didn’t bother him a bit. In fact, he thought to himself, I might purr, if I could. As the man sat on top of his cool, flowing mane, his shoes rested lightly on the lion's proud brow. They sat in silence, but to the lion it seemed like a much-longed-for conversation. He managed a quiet rumble deep within. The man glanced in the direction of the train.

8 comments:

  1. A lovely story. If only the man knew the effect he was having!

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  2. I love the questions this raises, not least of which is - what train?

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    1. "Train, train, take me on out of this town . . . " :-)
      Thanks for reading, Wombat!

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  3. I do love this - the rumbling stomach being mistaken for a train. This was amusing but I read also the bond between human and beast - the unheard communication. Thank you.

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    1. Thank you, Ramblings! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!

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  4. How often we call out for help, only to have it misinterpreted by those we call to. Beautiful analogy.

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  5. I liked this, so serene and calm, I felt the warmth of the lions companionship.

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